Wednesday 29 March 2017

Fishing O.T.J


2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Greanne
    Ka pai to tuhituhi! I really enjoyed listening to and watching your presentation. Your voice was very clear and that helped a lot. Your writing was really well crafted. I enjoyed hearing some deliberate choices of rich vocabulary: taonga, diligent, venture, accomplish. This is exactly what I would expect from a Year 8 writer Greanne, congratulations. You are a Tumeke writer!

    Ms Kemp

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  2. Kia ora Ms Kemp

    Thank you very much for taking your time to comment on my blog. You comment was positive, thoughtful and helpful.

    Kind regards
    Greanne

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