Monday 8 May 2017

Tree Weta Poem

Tree Weta
P1220201.JPGAs night time arrives, your garden comes alive.
High up in the holes of the lowland trees lurks
Weta Rakau making way out of their gloomy galleries.


The six legged invertebrate,
Protected by the nut hard shield,
Creeps through the forest in search of food.
Their mouth running dry at the sight of
leaves, lichen, seed heads,
fruit and flowers appear
they begin to munch on their tasty kai.
P1220197.JPGAs Spring appears they begin to mate,
Males fighting off others with razor sharp jaws
And pointed spiked legs.
Once Naghuru arrives,
Six to ten at a time,
Lay the eggs at night time.
As they mature they’re shedding their skin,
This process continues
Like the shimmery, shining sun passing by.
As predators over there, seek high and low
in search of tasty midnight snacks.
Weka, Kiwi, Reptiles and bats
Were native predators before cats and rats.

  Aotearoa New Zealand fills the ngahere with
Giant weta, Tusked weta, Ground weta and Cave weta.
Danger of soon not being found.
By Greanne

4 comments:

  1. Hi Greanne,
    I like the way you skipped some words like "Danger of soon not being found." The pictures are cool. I like the way you put TREE weta so its not just any weta. you got a tremondos amount of information such as what they eat. next time ad stuff like ryme and onmatapaya. oter then that this was really good. I really enjoyed reading this poem.
    by Bryce

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  2. Hi Bryce
    I you have a good look at our work you will see that we have included rhyme and onomatopoeia. Rats, cats and bats are rhyme. Shimmery, shining sun is onomatopoeia. you need to check your comment because there are a few errors.

    Kind regards
    Greanne

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  3. Hi Greanne my name is Mataio I am from Panmure Bridge School. I have looked at your poem about the weta and it was very interesting I really like how you used onomatopoeia and rhyme. Next time you could try and centre your work but apart from that your work was great.

    Kind regards
    Mataio

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  4. Kia ora Mantaio

    Thank you very much for taking your time to comment on my blog. You comment was positive, thoughtful and helpful.

    Kind regards
    Greanne

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